Update to serial 200524

diff --git a/src/homeland.inf b/src/homeland.inf
index eefeecabada91ab75a683b9f0087969b4903878b..324963827439c498838c0ca4e992755602ff6a9e 100644 (file)
--- a/src/homeland.inf
+++ b/src/homeland.inf
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Constant Headline
 Include "parser";
 Include "verblib";
 Release 0;
-Serial "200523";
+Serial "200524";
 Include "src/objects/intro/kitchen.inf";
 Include "src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf";
 Include "src/objects/intro/bedroom.inf";

diff --git a/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf b/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf
index a81851d9f1a94c962d7c365f7916c1d225f4662c..3f313e10ae47c5a96f4fb6db9e18c956e9ecb6fa 100644 (file)
--- a/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
+! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
 !
 ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or
 ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License
@@ -15,11 +15,17 @@
 
 Object  neighborkitchen "Kitchen"
   with  description 
-            "You are in your neighbor's kitchen. A large kitchen, 
-            though by now everything has been removed. Only the 
-            kitchen island and fireplace remain in stark contrast to 
-            the bare kitchen. The livingroom is to the east. The door 
-            to the back yard is to the west.",
+            "You are in your neighbor's kitchen. It's a large 
+             contemporary kitchen with an open design and many flat 
+             surfaces. The color palette is very bright and in 
+             perfect harmony with the kitchen. It's timeless and 
+             beautiful. The walls look like they've been used to 
+             store things, with some faint outlines remaining that 
+             gives a lived-in look. It could have been a luxury 
+             cooking environment, though by now everything has been 
+             removed. Only the kitchen island and fireplace remain in 
+             stark contrast to the bare kitchen. The livingroom is to 
+             the east. The door to the back yard is to the west.",
         e_to neighborlivingroom,
         w_to backyard,
   has   light;

diff --git a/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf b/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf
index 601a6ea3c29f8e18c2c0eb6ab705aae533456151..e53fc43a818c6f435dbec03498cb93a33adcbaa1 100644 (file)
--- a/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
+! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
 !
 ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or
 ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License
@@ -20,17 +20,15 @@ Object  neighborlivingroom "Neighbor's Livingroom"
             your neighbor here last week. All of the furniture has 
             been removed and the air smells stale. A large bay window 
             enclosed by sheer cobalt blue curtains allowing light to 
-            come through. There's another room to the north. A door is 
-            to the east.^^A machine as tall as you sits in the center 
-            of their livingroom. It consists of three transparent 
-            spheres joined together containing machinery. A barrel 
-            with a small aperture comes out of the farthest sphere, 
-            pointing down and to the wall. The entire thing rests on 
-            a shiny metal platform allowing it to rotate and tilt with 
-            ease.",
+            come through. A door is to the east.^^A machine as tall as 
+            you sits in the center of their livingroom. It consists 
+            of three transparent spheres joined together containing 
+            machinery. A barrel with a small aperture comes out of the 
+            farthest sphere, pointing down and to the wall. The 
+            entire thing rests on a shiny metal platform allowing it 
+            to rotate and tilt with ease.",
         w_to neighborkitchen,
         e_to neighbordoor,
-        n_to grandlivingroom,
         before [;
           Go:
             if (bluebutton has on && poker notin machine) {

diff --git a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
index 3770904b2e0ebc0bd3813e8af921e2402350d3bd..b88a0ed5a8520827ec902bbb8c849eaa931fdc08 100644 (file)
--- a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
+! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
 !
 ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or
 ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License
@@ -15,12 +15,16 @@
 
 Object  Sidewalk "Sidewalk"
   with  description 
-            "You are standing on the sidewalk of a very busy street 
-            in front of your house. It is barely cloudy and already 
-            hot this morning. Smaller branches of trees are in motion 
-            from the light wind, which helps to provide some relief 
-            from the heat. Your home is to the west. Your neighbor's 
-            home is to the northwest.",
+            "You are standing on the sidewalk in front of your house. 
+            The street is normally quiet, but it's been very busy 
+            today like trying to get through a busy movie theater, 
+            and the sound of the traffic has been particularly 
+            noticeable. The traffic is a good sign of what going on 
+            in the city as a whole today. It is barely cloudy and 
+            already hot this morning. Smaller branches of trees are in 
+            motion from the light wind, which helps to provide some 
+            relief from the heat. Your home is to the west. Your 
+            neighbor's home is to the northwest.",
         n_to 
             "Some inconsiderate person parked their car on the 
             sidewalk which blocks your path. It might be nice to call