From c9a1a392205955c12932be89195439636a381b26 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jason Self Date: Sun, 24 May 2020 19:41:54 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Update to serial 200524 --- src/homeland.inf | 2 +- src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf | 18 ++++++++++++------ src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf | 18 ++++++++---------- src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf | 18 +++++++++++------- 4 files changed, 32 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/homeland.inf b/src/homeland.inf index eefeeca..3249638 100644 --- a/src/homeland.inf +++ b/src/homeland.inf @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Constant Headline Include "parser"; Include "verblib"; Release 0; -Serial "200523"; +Serial "200524"; Include "src/objects/intro/kitchen.inf"; Include "src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf"; Include "src/objects/intro/bedroom.inf"; diff --git a/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf b/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf index a81851d..3f313e1 100644 --- a/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf +++ b/src/objects/intro/neighborkitchen.inf @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self +! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self ! ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License @@ -15,11 +15,17 @@ Object neighborkitchen "Kitchen" with description - "You are in your neighbor's kitchen. A large kitchen, - though by now everything has been removed. Only the - kitchen island and fireplace remain in stark contrast to - the bare kitchen. The livingroom is to the east. The door - to the back yard is to the west.", + "You are in your neighbor's kitchen. It's a large + contemporary kitchen with an open design and many flat + surfaces. The color palette is very bright and in + perfect harmony with the kitchen. It's timeless and + beautiful. The walls look like they've been used to + store things, with some faint outlines remaining that + gives a lived-in look. It could have been a luxury + cooking environment, though by now everything has been + removed. Only the kitchen island and fireplace remain in + stark contrast to the bare kitchen. The livingroom is to + the east. The door to the back yard is to the west.", e_to neighborlivingroom, w_to backyard, has light; diff --git a/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf b/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf index 601a6ea..e53fc43 100644 --- a/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf +++ b/src/objects/intro/neighborlivingroom.inf @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self +! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self ! ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License @@ -20,17 +20,15 @@ Object neighborlivingroom "Neighbor's Livingroom" your neighbor here last week. All of the furniture has been removed and the air smells stale. A large bay window enclosed by sheer cobalt blue curtains allowing light to - come through. There's another room to the north. A door is - to the east.^^A machine as tall as you sits in the center - of their livingroom. It consists of three transparent - spheres joined together containing machinery. A barrel - with a small aperture comes out of the farthest sphere, - pointing down and to the wall. The entire thing rests on - a shiny metal platform allowing it to rotate and tilt with - ease.", + come through. A door is to the east.^^A machine as tall as + you sits in the center of their livingroom. It consists + of three transparent spheres joined together containing + machinery. A barrel with a small aperture comes out of the + farthest sphere, pointing down and to the wall. The + entire thing rests on a shiny metal platform allowing it + to rotate and tilt with ease.", w_to neighborkitchen, e_to neighbordoor, - n_to grandlivingroom, before [; Go: if (bluebutton has on && poker notin machine) { diff --git a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf index 3770904..b88a0ed 100644 --- a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf +++ b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self +! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self ! ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License @@ -15,12 +15,16 @@ Object Sidewalk "Sidewalk" with description - "You are standing on the sidewalk of a very busy street - in front of your house. It is barely cloudy and already - hot this morning. Smaller branches of trees are in motion - from the light wind, which helps to provide some relief - from the heat. Your home is to the west. Your neighbor's - home is to the northwest.", + "You are standing on the sidewalk in front of your house. + The street is normally quiet, but it's been very busy + today like trying to get through a busy movie theater, + and the sound of the traffic has been particularly + noticeable. The traffic is a good sign of what going on + in the city as a whole today. It is barely cloudy and + already hot this morning. Smaller branches of trees are in + motion from the light wind, which helps to provide some + relief from the heat. Your home is to the west. Your + neighbor's home is to the northwest.", n_to "Some inconsiderate person parked their car on the sidewalk which blocks your path. It might be nice to call -- 2.31.1