Apply some fixups

diff --git a/agalder.txt b/agalder.txt
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--- a/agalder.txt
+++ b/agalder.txt
@@ -2214,9 +2214,7 @@ to seek easier prey.
 Unruffled, she slid the vibroknife back into its sheath on her wrist
 and strode off into the night, wondering what Liam was doing.
 
 Unruffled, she slid the vibroknife back into its sheath on her wrist
 and strode off into the night, wondering what Liam was doing.
 

-Liam Murphy: Advisor to President for Life
-
-==== Maloney; Resistance Operative ====
+==== Liam Murphy: Advisor to President for Life ====

 
 Liam Murphy was at home, feet up, with a drink in his hand, staring at
 plans for the pirates' invasion of the Emerald Palace, the
 
 Liam Murphy was at home, feet up, with a drink in his hand, staring at
 plans for the pirates' invasion of the Emerald Palace, the


@@ -2270,9 +2268,8 @@ He had been kicked off a passenger liner when he had run out of money.
 He frowned. When he had lost all his money gambling in the first-class
 lounge. Landing on a slimeball planet, he had tried to use what skills
 he had to earn his way off. No one, it seemed, wanted a
 He frowned. When he had lost all his money gambling in the first-class
 lounge. Landing on a slimeball planet, he had tried to use what skills
 he had to earn his way off. No one, it seemed, wanted a

-lawyer/accountant. Even one with a degree from Harvard. The planet
-Harvard, which was entirely devoted to higher education.
-Law/Accounting had been easy for him. His mind worked logically.
+lawyer/accountant. Law/Accounting had been easy for him. His mind
+worked logically.

 
 Then a military fleet arrived in system and he had been recruited to
 join them. They could definitely use his advice, they said.
 
 Then a military fleet arrived in system and he had been recruited to
 join them. They could definitely use his advice, they said.


@@ -2304,8 +2301,8 @@ the medical profession and sighed. They were going to interrogate him.
 He woke up with no memory of the questioning when a soft voice called
 his name. He was groggy but otherwise comfortable. He opened his eyes
 and saw an angel. That was when he met Silver. She ministered to him
 He woke up with no memory of the questioning when a soft voice called
 his name. He was groggy but otherwise comfortable. He opened his eyes
 and saw an angel. That was when he met Silver. She ministered to him

-professionally. She was a Nurse/Healer, trained at Johns Hopkins - the
-planet. She could have been a doctor but didn't want that profession.
+professionally. She was a Nurse/Healer - She could have been a doctor
+but didn't want that profession.

 
 She helped him maintain his dignity through the recovery from
 anesthesia with kindness and humor. That was when he fell in love.
 
 She helped him maintain his dignity through the recovery from
 anesthesia with kindness and humor. That was when he fell in love.