Add 'by the noise, afraid that someone heard and would come'

diff --git a/agalder.txt b/agalder.txt
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--- a/agalder.txt
+++ b/agalder.txt
@@ -823,12 +823,13 @@ To Alfie, it seemed that she weighed almost nothing. He threw her over
 his shoulder, collected his gear, and carefully walked to the opposite 
 side of the roof. The roof of the neighboring home was only two meters 
 away. He threw his gear bag across the gap, then tossed the woman 
-over. She landed with a heavy 'thunk'. Alarmed, he waited several 
-minutes before crossing over himself. From that roof, he was able to 
-drop down three feet to a small garden behind the house. Using alleys 
-and back gardens, he made his way to the edge of the wilderness. Then, 
-having sent a second message to Cassidy, he sat and waited. Cassidy 
-would want to talk to the forensics woman.
+over. She landed with a heavy 'thunk'. Alarmed by the noise, afraid 
+that someone heard and would come, he waited several minutes before 
+crossing over himself. From that roof, he was able to drop down three 
+feet to a small garden behind the house. Using alleys and back 
+gardens, he made his way to the edge of the wilderness. Then, having 
+sent a second message to Cassidy, he sat and waited. Cassidy would 
+want to talk to the forensics woman.
 
 ==== Cassidy: Second-in-Command of the Syndicate ====