Tick some things off the TODO list.

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@@ -4,22 +4,18 @@ Captain Fate: take 2
 
 .. epigraph::
 
-   | *U was a usurer, a miserable elf;*
-   | *V was a vintner, who drank all himself.*
+   | |CENTER| *U was a usurer, a miserable elf;*
+   | |CENTER| *V was a vintner, who drank all himself.*
 
 .. only:: html
 
    .. image:: /images/picV.png
       :align: left
 
-.. raw:: latex
-
-   \dropcap{v}
-
-iewed from the inside, Benny's café is warm and welcoming, and packed 
-with lunchtime customers. We'll try to conjure up some appropriate 
-images, but the main focus of the room isn't the decor: it's the door 
-leading to the toilet -- and, perhaps, privacy?
+|V|\iewed from the inside, Benny's café is warm and welcoming, and packed
+with lunchtime customers. We'll try to conjure up some appropriate images,
+but the main focus of the room isn't the decor: it's the door leading to
+the toilet -- and, perhaps, privacy?
 
 .. _homely-atmos:
 
@@ -651,12 +647,12 @@ which restores the value originally stored in ``ks`` to ``keep_silent``.
 The effect is that we manage to leave it as it was before we tampered 
 with it.
 
-Well, that's about everything about doors. Everything? Well, no, not 
-really; any object can grow as complex as your imagination allows, but 
-we’ll drop the subject here. If you care to see more sophisticated 
-doors, check Exercises 3 and 4 in the *Inform Designer's Manual*, where 
-an obliging door opens and unlocks by itself if the player simply walks 
-in its direction.
+Well, that's about everything about doors. Everything? Well, no, not
+really; any object can grow as complex as your imagination allows, but
+we’ll drop the subject here. If you care to see more sophisticated doors,
+check Exercises :dm4:`3 and 4 <s6.html#ex3>` in the |DM4|, where an
+obliging door opens and unlocks by itself if the player simply walks in its
+direction.
 
 So far, we have the player in front of a locked door leading to the 
 toilet. A dead end? No, the description mentions a scribbled note on its