Improved the description of the front porch.

diff --git a/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf b/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf
index e85bef25875f707670fa6916cc8099f71819785d..c04195355ed618058e13d35c8eac7d4a8c418f5e 100644 (file)
--- a/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
+! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
 !
 ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or
 ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License
@@ -16,9 +16,14 @@
 Object  frontporch "Front Porch"
   with  description 
             "You are on your neighbor's front porch. It consists of a 
-            coffee brown wooden floor connected to and surrounded by a 
-            parchment white wooden fence, with an opening to the 
-            sidewalk in the southeast. Their front door is to the 
+            coffee brown wooden floor connected to and surrounded a 
+            parchment white wooden fence. The fence is obviously new 
+            and looks great. It's tall enough to make climbing it 
+            impossible. The design of the porch places the focus on 
+            the front door. A deep red color, the door is large, high 
+            quality and has no window. It has a shiny brass handle, 
+            which appears very sturdy. There's an opening to the 
+            southwest toward the sidewalk. Their front door is to the 
             west.",
         cant_go "That parchment white wooden fence is too high to get over.",
         se_to sidewalk,
@@ -27,8 +32,9 @@ Object  frontporch "Front Porch"
 
 Object  neighbordoor "front door" frontporch
   with  name 'door' 'front' 'red',
-        description "A deep red color it has no window and a shiny 
-                    brass handle.",
+        description "The door is large and high quality. A deep red 
+                    color it has no window and a shiny brass handle, 
+                    which appears to be very sturdy.",
         found_in frontporch neighborlivingroom,
         door_dir [;
             if (location == frontporch)