From fb4af8ffd8af316b5fd58e0a2f9148fc84eb35b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jason Self Date: Sat, 23 May 2020 22:26:20 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Improved the description of the front porch. --- src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf | 18 ++++++++++++------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf b/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf index e85bef2..c041953 100644 --- a/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf +++ b/src/objects/intro/frontporch.inf @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self +! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self ! ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License @@ -16,9 +16,14 @@ Object frontporch "Front Porch" with description "You are on your neighbor's front porch. It consists of a - coffee brown wooden floor connected to and surrounded by a - parchment white wooden fence, with an opening to the - sidewalk in the southeast. Their front door is to the + coffee brown wooden floor connected to and surrounded a + parchment white wooden fence. The fence is obviously new + and looks great. It's tall enough to make climbing it + impossible. The design of the porch places the focus on + the front door. A deep red color, the door is large, high + quality and has no window. It has a shiny brass handle, + which appears very sturdy. There's an opening to the + southwest toward the sidewalk. Their front door is to the west.", cant_go "That parchment white wooden fence is too high to get over.", se_to sidewalk, @@ -27,8 +32,9 @@ Object frontporch "Front Porch" Object neighbordoor "front door" frontporch with name 'door' 'front' 'red', - description "A deep red color it has no window and a shiny - brass handle.", + description "The door is large and high quality. A deep red + color it has no window and a shiny brass handle, + which appears to be very sturdy.", found_in frontporch neighborlivingroom, door_dir [; if (location == frontporch) -- 2.31.1