The guards are there. There's a bunch of guys standing around in
uniforms, their faces covered by bandanas and ready to go on shift
with a few people getting off shift. Without missing a beat I look to
-the officer that's working the front desk. He's a middle aged older
-guy with a beard and thick black hair. I notice at least two men
-talking to him. He nods to me and I continue on to the central area.
+the officer that's working the front desk. He's a middle aged guy with
+a beard and thick black hair who looks like he's been through a lot..
+I notice at least two men talking to him. He nods to me and I continue
+on to the central area.
Grabbing a towel, I toss it over my shoulder and push past the
officers. Walking in to the shower I take a seat in the corner to
standing around talking about playing some football in the middle of
the night when I arrive. "Not me", I tell them, "I've made two runs
around the compound and I'm beat." Still, I take a few minutes to walk
-outside with my teammate before going to bed. I can't sleep because my
-head feels like it's going to explode any minute but I can see my eyes
-glazed over. I tried a few different pills to bring some relief. It
-was hard because while they certainly helped not all of their side
+outside with my teammates before going to bed. I can't sleep because
+my head feels like it's going to explode any minute but I can see my
+eyes glazed over. I tried a few different pills to bring some relief.
+It was hard because while they certainly helped not all of their side
effects were worth the trouble.
"The perimeter has been breached," I heard the voice saying urgently