Some proofreading and fixes here and there.

[ibg.git] / chapters / 03.rst

diff --git a/chapters/03.rst b/chapters/03.rst
index 7f72e254d2a9c3164db743e88881b66516dbd82a..aff3993823c0ba616ebd884a05d9f7a01b8df1ee 100644 (file)
--- a/chapters/03.rst
+++ b/chapters/03.rst
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
    | *F was a farmer, and followed the plough.*
 
 .. only:: html
    | *F was a farmer, and followed the plough.*
 
 .. only:: html

+

   .. image:: /images/picE.png
      :align: left
 
   .. image:: /images/picE.png
      :align: left
 


@@ -87,12 +88,12 @@ that we design will start out like this.  Follow these steps:
    Ensure the file is named ``Heidi.inf``, rather than ``Heidi.txt`` or
    ``Heidi.inf.txt``.
 
    Ensure the file is named ``Heidi.inf``, rather than ``Heidi.txt`` or
    ``Heidi.inf.txt``.
 

-   Remember that, throughout this guide, we place the "TYPE" symbol
+   Remember that, throughout this guide, we place the "``TYPE``" symbol

    alongside pieces of code that we recommend you to type into your own
    game files as you read through the examples (which, conversely, means
    alongside pieces of code that we recommend you to type into your own
    game files as you read through the examples (which, conversely, means

-   that you don't need to type the unmarked pieces of code).  You'll learn
-   Inform more quickly by trying it for yourself, rather than just taking
-   our word for how things work.
+   that you *don't* need to type the unmarked pieces of code).  You'll 
+   learn Inform more quickly by trying it for yourself, rather than just 
+   taking our word for how things work.

 
    .. todo::
 
 
    .. todo::
 


@@ -197,7 +198,7 @@ looking at the source file.
   By the way, the compiler *doesn't* give special treatment to exclamation
   marks in quoted text: ``!`` within quotes "..." is treated as a normal
   character.  On this line, the first ``!`` is part of the sequence (or
   By the way, the compiler *doesn't* give special treatment to exclamation
   marks in quoted text: ``!`` within quotes "..." is treated as a normal
   character.  On this line, the first ``!`` is part of the sequence (or

-  string) of characters to be displayed:
+  **string**) of characters to be displayed:

 
   .. code-block:: inform6
 
 
   .. code-block:: inform6
 


@@ -583,17 +584,18 @@ line to each definition:
            name 'bird^s' 'nest' 'twigs' 'moss',
       has  ;
 
            name 'bird^s' 'nest' 'twigs' 'moss',
       has  ;
 

-The ``name`` introduces a list in single quotes '...'.  We call each of
-those quoted things a **dictionary word**, and we do mean "word", not
-"phrase" (``'baby'``\ ``'bird'`` rather than ``'baby bird'``); you can't
-uses spaces, commas or periods in dictionary words, though there's a space
-*between* each one, and the whole list ends with a comma.  The idea is that
-the interpreter decides which object a player is talking about by matching
-what she types against the full set of all dictionary words.  If the player
-mentions BIRD, or BABY BIRD, or NESTLING, it's the ``baby bird`` that she
-means; if she mentions NEST, BIRD'S NEST or MOSS, it's the ``bird's nest``.
-And if she types NEST BABY or BIRD TWIGS, the interpreter will politely say
-that it doesn't understand what on earth she's talking about.
+The ``name`` introduces a list in single quotes '...'.  We call each of 
+those quoted things a **dictionary word**, and we do mean "word", not 
+"phrase" (``'baby'``\ ``'bird'`` rather than ``'baby bird'``); you can't 
+uses spaces, commas or periods *in* dictionary words, though there's a 
+space *between* each one, and the whole list ends with a comma.  The 
+idea is that the interpreter decides which object a player is talking 
+about by matching what she types against the full set of all dictionary 
+words.  If the player mentions BIRD, or BABY BIRD, or NESTLING, it's the 
+``baby bird`` that she means; if she mentions NEST, BIRD'S NEST or MOSS, 
+it's the ``bird's nest``. And if she types NEST BABY or BIRD TWIGS, the 
+interpreter will politely say that it doesn't understand what on earth 
+she's talking about.

 
 .. note::
 
 
 .. note::
 


@@ -742,14 +744,14 @@ at the top of the tree.  Again, not many surprises in this definition:
             name 'wide' 'firm' 'flat' 'bough' 'branch',
      has    static supporter;
 
             name 'wide' 'firm' 'flat' 'bough' 'branch',
      has    static supporter;
 

-The only new things are those two labels.  ``static`` is similar to
-``scenery``: it prevents the branch from being picked up by the player
-character, but *doesn't* suppress mention of it when describing the
-setting.  And ``supporter`` is rather like the ``container`` that we used
-for the nest, except that this time the player character can put other
-objects *onto* the branch.  (In passing, we'll mention that an object can't
-normally be both a ``container`` and a ``supporter``.)  And so here are our
-objects again:
+The only new things are those two labels.  ``static`` is similar to 
+``scenery``: it prevents the branch from being picked up by the player 
+character, but *doesn't* suppress mention of it when describing the 
+setting.  And ``supporter`` is rather like the ``container`` that we 
+used for the nest, except that this time the player character can put 
+other objects *onto* the branch.  (In passing, we'll mention that an 
+object can't normally be both a ``container`` *and* a ``supporter``.)  
+And so here are our objects again:

 
 .. code-block:: inform6
 
 
 .. code-block:: inform6