Improve description of the living room

diff --git a/src/homeland.inf b/src/homeland.inf
index bb97de1bbff158d75c75c62da11ded8c87fbd4c0..eefeecabada91ab75a683b9f0087969b4903878b 100644 (file)
--- a/src/homeland.inf
+++ b/src/homeland.inf
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Constant Headline
 Include "parser";
 Include "verblib";
 Release 0;
-Serial "200329";
+Serial "200523";
 Include "src/objects/intro/kitchen.inf";
 Include "src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf";
 Include "src/objects/intro/bedroom.inf";

diff --git a/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf b/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf
index e7a473e1c4033cefc464179c29946ece8cdb048d..b69183b66570a536ee50a09bc37f6c4fdeb06269 100644 (file)
--- a/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf
@@ -15,10 +15,16 @@
 
 Object  livingroom "Livingroom"
   with  description 
-            "You are in a modestly furnished livingroom. Pictures 
-            hang from the walls. You can hear the sound of vehicles 
-            driving by outside. The kitchen is to the west. The front 
-            door is to the east. Your bedroom is to the south.",
+            "You are in a modestly furnished living room. It's very a 
+            traditional but modern as far as the style of rooms go. It 
+            has a certain bourgeois feeling, although it doesn't seem 
+            very large. There's a couch in the middle of the room 
+            facing a television. Pictures hang from the other walls. 
+            The pictures were commissioned by your family, but a lot 
+            of people claim they painted them. You can hear the sound 
+            of vehicles driving by outside. The kitchen is to the 
+            west. The front door is to the east. Your bedroom is to 
+            the south.",
         before [;
           Listen:
             print "You can hear the sound of vehicles driving by outside.^";