From: Jason Self Date: Sun, 29 May 2022 21:36:05 +0000 (-0700) Subject: Apply some fixups X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?p=universe.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=e694692b0696eb23240f563054ae8cfdc700ac85 Apply some fixups --- diff --git a/agalder.txt b/agalder.txt index dd1ba38..2580a7f 100644 --- a/agalder.txt +++ b/agalder.txt @@ -2214,9 +2214,7 @@ to seek easier prey. Unruffled, she slid the vibroknife back into its sheath on her wrist and strode off into the night, wondering what Liam was doing. -Liam Murphy: Advisor to President for Life - -==== Maloney; Resistance Operative ==== +==== Liam Murphy: Advisor to President for Life ==== Liam Murphy was at home, feet up, with a drink in his hand, staring at plans for the pirates' invasion of the Emerald Palace, the @@ -2270,9 +2268,8 @@ He had been kicked off a passenger liner when he had run out of money. He frowned. When he had lost all his money gambling in the first-class lounge. Landing on a slimeball planet, he had tried to use what skills he had to earn his way off. No one, it seemed, wanted a -lawyer/accountant. Even one with a degree from Harvard. The planet -Harvard, which was entirely devoted to higher education. -Law/Accounting had been easy for him. His mind worked logically. +lawyer/accountant. Law/Accounting had been easy for him. His mind +worked logically. Then a military fleet arrived in system and he had been recruited to join them. They could definitely use his advice, they said. @@ -2304,8 +2301,8 @@ the medical profession and sighed. They were going to interrogate him. He woke up with no memory of the questioning when a soft voice called his name. He was groggy but otherwise comfortable. He opened his eyes and saw an angel. That was when he met Silver. She ministered to him -professionally. She was a Nurse/Healer, trained at Johns Hopkins - the -planet. She could have been a doctor but didn't want that profession. +professionally. She was a Nurse/Healer - She could have been a doctor +but didn't want that profession. She helped him maintain his dignity through the recovery from anesthesia with kindness and humor. That was when he fell in love.