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@@ -9,9 +9,10 @@ I get to the barracks just past midnight and walk in to the main door.
 The guards are there. There's a bunch of guys standing around in 
 uniforms, their faces covered by bandanas and ready to go on shift 
 with a few people getting off shift. Without missing a beat I look to 
-the officer that's working the front desk. He's a middle aged older 
-guy with a beard and thick black hair. I notice at least two men 
-talking to him. He nods to me and I continue on to the central area.
+the officer that's working the front desk. He's a middle aged guy with 
+a beard and thick black hair who looks like he's been through a lot.. 
+I notice at least two men talking to him. He nods to me and I continue 
+on to the central area.
 
 Grabbing a towel, I toss it over my shoulder and push past the 
 officers. Walking in to the shower I take a seat in the corner to