X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?p=super-star-trek.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=sst-doc.xml;h=e810746fa6f08a843a6d1ea889a00346fcb06a48;hp=c5863a7e2a99db378747e3ed0eca2339782c5180;hb=c1bda490aef42a6b3d0e8d97a20fb58236d02ee7;hpb=4df73495bbade3ebd8b03d68f838f67dd717db8f

diff --git a/sst-doc.xml b/sst-doc.xml
index c5863a7..e810746 100644
--- a/sst-doc.xml
+++ b/sst-doc.xml
@@ -589,7 +589,7 @@ safely even in the midst of battle.</para>
 Mnemonic:  MOVE
 Shortest abbreviation:  M
 Full command:  MOVE MANUAL &lt;displacement&gt;
-               MOVE AUTOMATIC &lt;estination*gt;
+               MOVE AUTOMATIC &lt;destination&gt;
 </literallayout>
 
 <para>This command is the usual way to move from one place to another
@@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ scan shown earlier.</para>
 
 <para>&lt;para&gt;where &lt;qrow&gt; and &lt;qcol&gt; are the row and column
 numbers of the destination quadrant, and &lt;srow&gt; and &lt;scol&gt;
-are the row and column numbers of thedestination sector in that
+are the row and column numbers of the destination sector in that
 quadrant.  This command also moves your ship in a straight line path
 to the destination.  For moving within a quadrant, &lt;qrow&gt; and
 &lt;qcol&gt; may be omitted. For example, to move to sector 2 - 9 in
@@ -1652,22 +1652,36 @@ site</ulink>.</para>
 </para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
-<para>Modifications I made:</para>
+<para>Modifications I've made:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>
-I converted the flat-text SST.DOC file to XML-Docbook so it could be webbed.
-(That's what you're reading now.)
+I converted the flat-text SST.DOC file to XML-Docbook so it can be
+webbed. (That's what you're reading now.)
+</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>
+The command-help code needed a rewrite because the flat-text form of
+the documentation is now generated from XML and doesn't have the
+easily recognizable section delimiters it used to.  I wrote a script
+to filter that flat-text form into an sst.doc that's easy to parse for
+command descriptions, and changed some logic in sst.c to match.
 </para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>
-I cleaned up a lot of grubby FORTRANisms in the code internals.
+I've cleaned up a lot of grubby FORTRANisms in the code internals --
+used sizeof(), replaced magic numeric constants with #defines,
+that sort of thing.
 </para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>
 I fixed a surprising number of typos in the code and documentation.
 </para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>
-I changed the freeze logic to emit an identifiable magic number and 
-the thaw logic to check for it.
+All the game state now lives in one big structure that can be
+written to and read from disk as one blob.  The write gives it an
+an identifiable magic number and the thaw logic checks for same. 
+</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>
+I made the internal pager work, nd in the process got rid of a number
+of platform dependencies in the code.
 </para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>