From: Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
Date: Tue, 15 Feb 2022 14:28:50 +0000 (-0800)
Subject: Fix up backpack and flashlight names and correct a duplicated description
X-Git-Tag: r2~12
X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?p=snowed-in.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=b126ca7ab0c08303586f3b8f7b79533de07e3854

Fix up backpack and flashlight names and correct a duplicated description
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diff --git a/src/snowed-in.inf b/src/snowed-in.inf
index 4174df5..e09e33f 100644
--- a/src/snowed-in.inf
+++ b/src/snowed-in.inf
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Constant Headline
 Include "parser";
 Include "verblib";
 Release 1;
-Serial "220214";
+Serial "220215";
 
 Object  mainroom "Main Room"
   with  description 
@@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ Object  backpacklocation "Forest"
         ];
 
 Object  backpack "backpack" backpacklocation
-  with  name 'back' 'pack' 'blood',
+  with  name 'backpack' 'back' 'pack' 'blood',
   with  description 
             "The backpack is of medium size, black, with three white 
             stripes running vertically on the back. The middle stripe 
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ Object  backpack "backpack" backpacklocation
   has   clothing container openable;
 
 Object  flashlight "flashlight" backpack
-  with  name 'flash' 'light' 'torch',
+  with  name 'flashlight' 'flash' 'light' 'torch',
         description 
             "It looks like a cheap red plastic model, about eight 
             inches long.",
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ Object  flashlight "flashlight" backpack
             print_ret 
                 "You push on despite the bitter cold and the heavy 
                 snowfall as you come to a fork. There are two ways to 
-                go here, one is going up a hill to the south. The 
+                go here, one involves a hill to the south. The 
                 other way is continuing through the woods to the 
                 north.";
           2:
@@ -700,17 +700,16 @@ Object  flashlight "flashlight" backpack
                 is so desolate and barren.";
           5:
             print_ret 
-                "You trudge through the snow. The wind is really 
-                strong and howling like a banshee. You hear a horrible 
-                howl in the distance or is it the wind? Looking 
-                around you see nothing in this barren landscape but 
-                snow. You're not sure what to make of it, but you 
-                don't want to stick around to find out. The whole 
-                world is white. You can barely see five feet ahead of 
-                you. You hope you're going the right way. This place 
-                is so desolate and barren. There's no left, right, 
-                backward or forward. There's nothing but endless, 
-                unchanging whiteness.";
+                "You think you might can see a large figure stepping 
+                out of the trees and moving in the distance but the 
+                wind is blowing hard and whipping up massive amounts 
+                of snow, making it hard to tell for sure. Your breath 
+                billows out in huge clouds. If it keeps blowing like 
+                this, you're not sure if you'll ever be able to get 
+                back. Snow whirls through the air as a gust of wind 
+                picks up speed. The howling gets louder and more 
+                intense. There's no left, right, backward or forward. 
+                There's nothing but endless, unchanging whiteness.";
           6:
             PlayerTo(backpacklocation);
           7: