From: David Griffith Date: Thu, 7 Apr 2016 01:27:13 +0000 (-0700) Subject: Fixed transcribing errors. X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?p=ibg.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=ba19fe8c61aa6d36a3c691f286bc5bfeaeb2625b Fixed transcribing errors. --- diff --git a/chapters/01.rst b/chapters/01.rst index 407c5c6..cfbc00a 100644 --- a/chapters/01.rst +++ b/chapters/01.rst @@ -14,11 +14,12 @@ to consider briefly how IF, which has many narrative elements, differs from regular storytelling. Before we do *that*, though, let's look at an example of a familiar folk tale. - "There was once a man called Wilhelm Tell, from high in the he lived by - his skills Swiss Alps near the town Altdorf. A hunter and a guide, - proud mountaineer, in tracking and archery. It happened one day that - Wilhelm visited the town to buy provisions, and he took his son Walter - with him. + "There was once a man called Wilhelm Tell, from high in the Swiss + Alps near the town of Altdorf. A hunter and a guide, a proud + mountaineer, he lived by his skills Swiss Alps near the town + Altdorf. A hunter and a guide, proud mountaineer, in tracking and + archery. It happened one day that Wilhelm visited the town to buy + provisions, and he took his son Walter with him. The region was at the time governed by Hermann Gessler (a vain and petty man appointed as vogt by the Austrian emperor), who attempted a