Update the backstory inside the Freedo On The Beach image to sync up with the improve...

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 <!--
 Freedo On The Beach - Copyright (C) 2018 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
+==================================================================
 
 Freedo takes a vacation.
 
-The Freedo character originally started off as a draft from Burnaron 
-[0].
+The Freedo character originally started off as a draft from Burnaron
+[0], who later shared a vectorized version [1].
 
-A cleaned up version was developed by Rubén Rodríguez Pérez [1]. 
-It can also be found at [2] licensed under the GNU Free Documentation 
+A cleaned up version was developed by Rubén Rodríguez Pérez [2].
+It can also be found at [3] licensed under the GNU Free Documentation
 License (GFDL) version 1.2 or any later version. Rubén confirmed this 
-at [3].
+at [4] and [5].
+
+Burnaron's version came to be called Freetz [6], with the cleaned up
+version being called Freedo [7].
 
 Islene Calciolari Garcia and Alexandre Oliva made further changes to 
 Freedo by adding nostrils, opening the eyes, and changing the brush 
-color [4].
+color [8].
 
-Their modified version of Freedo can be found at [5] combined 
+Their modified version of Freedo can be found at [9] combined
 with the GNU head and licensed under the GFDL 1.2 or any later 
-version, as required by [6].
+version, as required by [10].
 
 Since Burnaron's draft didn't include any license terms I contacted 
 Burnaron via email and received permission to use the GFDL version 
@@ -32,22 +36,26 @@ version made by Islene Calciolari Garcia and Alexandre Oliva.
 
 Therefore:
 
-Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify 
-Freedo On The Beach under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation 
-License, Version 1.3 or any later version published by the Free 
-Software Foundation; with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover 
-Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts.
+Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify Freedo On The
+Beach, as well as this README file, under the terms of the GNU Free
+Documentation License, Version 1.3 or any later version published by
+the Free Software Foundation; with no Invariant Sections, no
+Front-Cover Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts.
 
-Freedo is, however, also a trademark for GNU Linux-libre [7].
+Freedo is, however, also a trademark for GNU Linux-libre [11].
 
-[0] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-March/000453.html 
-[1] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-April/000541.html
-[2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Linux-libre#/media/File:Freedo.svg
-[3] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2010-April/001133.html
-[4] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-May/000644.html
-[5] https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Freedo_con_GNU.svg
-[6] https://www.gnu.org/graphics/heckert_gnu.en.html
-[7] http://www.fsfla.org/ikiwiki/selibre/linux-libre/
+[0] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-March/000453.html
+[1] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-March/000464.html
+[2] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-April/000541.html
+[3] https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Freedo.svg
+[4] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-December/000923.html
+[5] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2010-April/001133.html
+[6] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-April/000533.html
+[7] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-May/000621.html
+[8] http://www.fsfla.org/pipermail/linux-libre/2009-May/000644.html
+[9] https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Freedo_con_GNU.svg
+[10] https://www.gnu.org/graphics/heckert_gnu.en.html
+[11] http://www.fsfla.org/ikiwiki/selibre/linux-libre/
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