From 412690504f08de3789622d31ba7d806aaff5886d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lxoliva Date: Wed, 29 Dec 2010 08:38:46 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Further tweaking to README git-svn-id: http://www.fsfla.org/svn/fsfla/software/linux-libre/scripts@7609 559672b5-ba27-0410-b829-e8f1faed8b1b --- deblob-2.6.37 | 21 +++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/deblob-2.6.37 b/deblob-2.6.37 index 736d1894655..c8ad15562ec 100755 --- a/deblob-2.6.37 +++ b/deblob-2.6.37 @@ -285,15 +285,16 @@ clean_sed ' /WHAT IS LINUX/i\ WHAT IS Linux-libre?\ \ - Linux-libre is a Free version of Linux (see below), suitable for\ - use with the GNU Operating System in 100% Free System Distributions.\ + Linux-libre is a Free version of the kernel Linux (see below),\ + suitable for use with the GNU Operating System in 100% Free\ + GNU/Linux-libre System Distributions.\ http://www.gnu.org/distros/\ \ It removes non-Free components from Linux, that are disguised as\ source code or distributed in separate files. It also disables\ - run-time requests for non-Free components, shipped separately or\ - as part of Linux, and documentation pointing to them, so as to\ - avoid (Free-)baiting users into the trap of non-Free Software.\ + run-time requests for non-Free components, shipped separately or as\ + part of Linux, and documentation pointing to them, so as to avoid\ + (Free-)baiting users into the trap of non-Free Software.\ http://www.fsfla.org/anuncio/2010-11-Linux-2.6.36-libre-debait\ \ Linux-libre started within the gNewSense GNU/Linux distribution.\ @@ -302,13 +303,13 @@ WHAT IS Linux-libre?\ \ Although the Linux-libre project takes a minimal-changes approach\ to cleaning up Linux, making no effort to substitute components\ - that need to be removed with functionally equivalent Free ones,\ - we encouraged and support efforts towards doing so.\ + that need to be removed with functionally equivalent Free ones, we\ + encourage and support efforts towards doing so.\ \ Our mascot is Freedo, a light-blue penguin that has just come out\ - of the the shower. Although we like penguins, GNU is a much greater\ - contribution to the entire system, so its mascot deserves more\ - promotion. See our web page for their images.\ + of the the shower. Although we like penguins, GNU is a much\ + greater contribution to the entire system, so its mascot deserves\ + more promotion. See our web page for their images.\ http://linux-libre.fsfla.org/\ ' README 'added blurb about Linux-libre' -- 2.31.1