From: Eric S. Raymond <esr@thyrsus.com>
Date: Sat, 3 Jun 2017 18:42:13 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: Address GitLab issue #7: History note about Crowther's version
X-Git-Tag: 0.90~18
X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=9dca58699f821a1e4eaa358a556bf6b27fe382b9;p=open-adventure.git

Address GitLab issue #7: History note about Crowther's version
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diff --git a/history.adoc b/history.adoc
index f64fef9..d01910b 100644
--- a/history.adoc
+++ b/history.adoc
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ The very first version was released by Crowther in 1976, in FORTRAN on
 the PDP-10 at Bolt, Beranek, and Newman. (Crowther was at the time
 writing what we could now call firmware for the earliest ARPANET
 routers.) It was a maze game based on the Colossal Cave complex in
-Kentucky, lacking most of the D&D-like elements now associated with
+Kentucky, including fewer of the D&D-like elements now associated with
 the game.
 
 Adventure as we now know it, the ancestor of all later versions, was
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ versions 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 and for all I know higher than that.  It seems
 best just to start a new numbering series while acknowledging the
 links back.
 
-I have reverted to "Advent" for the binary to avoid a name collision
+We have reverted to "Advent" for the binary to avoid a name collision
 with the BSD Games version.
 
 == Functional changes in Open Adventure ==