From: Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
Date: Sun, 24 May 2020 01:21:21 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: Improve description of the living room
X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=961a3619d9dd25d9322e2f7d156c6140e2c75b49;p=homeland.git

Improve description of the living room
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diff --git a/src/homeland.inf b/src/homeland.inf
index bb97de1..eefeeca 100644
--- a/src/homeland.inf
+++ b/src/homeland.inf
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Constant Headline
 Include "parser";
 Include "verblib";
 Release 0;
-Serial "200329";
+Serial "200523";
 Include "src/objects/intro/kitchen.inf";
 Include "src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf";
 Include "src/objects/intro/bedroom.inf";
diff --git a/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf b/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf
index e7a473e..b69183b 100644
--- a/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/livingroom.inf
@@ -15,10 +15,16 @@
 
 Object  livingroom "Livingroom"
   with  description 
-            "You are in a modestly furnished livingroom. Pictures 
-            hang from the walls. You can hear the sound of vehicles 
-            driving by outside. The kitchen is to the west. The front 
-            door is to the east. Your bedroom is to the south.",
+            "You are in a modestly furnished living room. It's very a 
+            traditional but modern as far as the style of rooms go. It 
+            has a certain bourgeois feeling, although it doesn't seem 
+            very large. There's a couch in the middle of the room 
+            facing a television. Pictures hang from the other walls. 
+            The pictures were commissioned by your family, but a lot 
+            of people claim they painted them. You can hear the sound 
+            of vehicles driving by outside. The kitchen is to the 
+            west. The front door is to the east. Your bedroom is to 
+            the south.",
         before [;
           Listen:
             print "You can hear the sound of vehicles driving by outside.^";