From: Glenn Hutchings Date: Sat, 9 Apr 2016 21:02:39 +0000 (+0100) Subject: Another transcribing fix. X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=93b809e046646a33c36aebfe33ea59d98ef6494a;p=ibg.git Another transcribing fix. --- diff --git a/chapters/01.rst b/chapters/01.rst index 85b1d6b..b04d963 100644 --- a/chapters/01.rst +++ b/chapters/01.rst @@ -17,12 +17,11 @@ to consider briefly how IF, which has many narrative elements, differs from regular storytelling. Before we do *that*, though, let's look at an example of a familiar folk tale. - "There was once a man called Wilhelm Tell, from high in the Swiss - Alps near the town of Altdorf. A hunter and a guide, a proud - mountaineer, he lived by his skills Swiss Alps near the town - Altdorf. A hunter and a guide, proud mountaineer, in tracking and - archery. It happened one day that Wilhelm visited the town to buy - provisions, and he took his son Walter with him. + "There was once a man called Wilhelm Tell, from high in the Swiss Alps + near the town of Altdorf. A hunter and a guide, a proud mountaineer, + he lived by his skills in tracking and archery. It happened one day + that Wilhelm visited the town to buy provisions, and he took his son + Walter with him. The region was at the time governed by Hermann Gessler (a vain and petty man appointed as vogt by the Austrian emperor), who attempted a