From: Christine Lemmer-Webber <cwebber@dustycloud.org>
Date: Thu, 15 Sep 2022 20:00:58 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: She's now a languid lady
X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=8d58115cb86351b7003153d0d35893ea764109e1;p=mudsync.git

She's now a languid lady
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diff --git a/worlds/bricabrac.scm b/worlds/bricabrac.scm
index 4f77e93..76148f2 100644
--- a/worlds/bricabrac.scm
+++ b/worlds/bricabrac.scm
@@ -256,17 +256,17 @@ character.\n")))
    ;; NPC: hotel owner
    ('lobby:hotel-owner
     <chatty-npc> 'lobby
-    #:name "a frumpy fellow"
+    #:name "a languid lady"
     #:desc
     '((p "  Whoever this is, she looks totally exhausted.  She's
 collapsed into the only comfortable looking chair in the room and you
 don't get the sense that she's likely to move any time soon.
-  You notice they're wearing a sticker badly adhesed to their clothing
-which says \"Hotel Proprietor\", but she looks so disorganized that you
-think that can't possibly be true... can it?
+  Attached to her frumpy dress is a barely secured pin which says
+\"Hotel Proprietor\", but she looks so disorganized that you think
+that can't possibly be true... can it?
   Despite her exhaustion, you sense she'd be happy to chat with you,
 though the conversation may be a bit one sided."))
-    #:goes-by '("frumpy fellow" "fellow"
+    #:goes-by '("languid lady" "lady"
                 "hotel proprietor" "proprietor")
     #:catchphrases hotel-owner-grumps)
    ;; Object: Sign