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diff --git a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
index b58226b..1fb4f1d 100644
--- a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
@@ -17,14 +17,14 @@ Object  Sidewalk "Sidewalk"
   with  description 
             "You are standing on the sidewalk in front of your house. 
             The street is normally quiet, but it's been very busy 
-            today like trying to get through a busy movie theater, 
-            and the sound of the traffic has been particularly 
-            noticeable. The traffic is a good sign of what going on 
-            in the city as a whole today. It is barely cloudy and 
-            already hot this morning. Smaller branches of trees are in 
-            motion from the light wind, which helps to provide some 
-            relief from the heat. Your home is to the west. Your 
-            neighbor's home is to the northwest.",
+            and crowded today, like trying to get through a busy movie 
+            theater, and the sound of the traffic has been 
+            particularly noticeable. The traffic is a good sign of 
+            what's going on in the city as a whole today. It is barely 
+            cloudy and already hot this morning. Smaller branches of 
+            trees are in motion from the light wind, which helps to 
+            provide some relief from the heat. Your home is to the 
+            west. Your neighbor's home is to the northwest.",
         n_to 
             "Some inconsiderate person parked their car on the 
             sidewalk which blocks your path. It might be nice to call