X-Git-Url: https://jxself.org/git/?a=blobdiff_plain;f=chapters%2F01.rst;h=b04d963834a64cb4e7dddf99b4cfd996cbb03834;hb=93b809e046646a33c36aebfe33ea59d98ef6494a;hp=85b1d6b086f77eb585d6d883f9db0be075628eea;hpb=fbbce8f30ba93c89681b3b69e9060a5d044c084c;p=ibg.git

diff --git a/chapters/01.rst b/chapters/01.rst
index 85b1d6b..b04d963 100644
--- a/chapters/01.rst
+++ b/chapters/01.rst
@@ -17,12 +17,11 @@ to consider briefly how IF, which has many narrative elements, differs from
 regular storytelling.  Before we do *that*, though, let's look at an example
 of a familiar folk tale.
 
-    "There was once a man called Wilhelm Tell, from high in the Swiss
-    Alps near the town of Altdorf.  A hunter and a guide, a proud 
-    mountaineer, he lived by his skills Swiss Alps near the town 
-    Altdorf.  A hunter and a guide, proud mountaineer, in tracking and 
-    archery.  It happened one day that Wilhelm visited the town to buy 
-    provisions, and he took his son Walter with him.
+    "There was once a man called Wilhelm Tell, from high in the Swiss Alps
+    near the town of Altdorf.  A hunter and a guide, a proud mountaineer,
+    he lived by his skills in tracking and archery.  It happened one day
+    that Wilhelm visited the town to buy provisions, and he took his son
+    Walter with him.
 
     The region was at the time governed by Hermann Gessler (a vain and
     petty man appointed as vogt by the Austrian emperor), who attempted a