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diff --git a/src/snowed-in.inf b/src/snowed-in.inf
index 7c79275..d13860b 100644
--- a/src/snowed-in.inf
+++ b/src/snowed-in.inf
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Constant Headline
 Include "parser";
 Include "verblib";
 Release 1;
-Serial "220205";
+Serial "220528";
 
 Object  mainroom "Main Room"
   with  description 
@@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ Object  backpacklocation "Forest"
         ];
 
 Object  backpack "backpack" backpacklocation
-  with  name 'back' 'pack' 'blood',
+  with  name 'backpack' 'back' 'pack' 'blood',
   with  description 
             "The backpack is of medium size, black, with three white 
             stripes running vertically on the back. The middle stripe 
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ Object  backpack "backpack" backpacklocation
   has   clothing container openable;
 
 Object  flashlight "flashlight" backpack
-  with  name 'flash' 'light' 'torch',
+  with  name 'flashlight' 'flash' 'light' 'torch',
         description 
             "It looks like a cheap red plastic model, about eight 
             inches long.",
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ Object  flashlight "flashlight" backpack
             print_ret 
                 "You push on despite the bitter cold and the heavy 
                 snowfall as you come to a fork. There are two ways to 
-                go here, one is going up a hill to the south. The 
+                go here, one involves a hill to the south. The 
                 other way is continuing through the woods to the 
                 north.";
           2:
@@ -700,17 +700,16 @@ Object  flashlight "flashlight" backpack
                 is so desolate and barren.";
           5:
             print_ret 
-                "You trudge through the snow. The wind is really 
-                strong and howling like a banshee. You hear a horrible 
-                howl in the distance or is it the wind? Looking 
-                around you see nothing in this barren landscape but 
-                snow. You're not sure what to make of it, but you 
-                don't want to stick around to find out. The whole 
-                world is white. You can barely see five feet ahead of 
-                you. You hope you're going the right way. This place 
-                is so desolate and barren. There's no left, right, 
-                backward or forward. There's nothing but endless, 
-                unchanging whiteness.";
+                "You think you might can see a large figure stepping 
+                out of the trees and moving in the distance but the 
+                wind is blowing hard and whipping up massive amounts 
+                of snow, making it hard to tell for sure. Your breath 
+                billows out in huge clouds. If it keeps blowing like 
+                this, you're not sure if you'll ever be able to get 
+                back. Snow whirls through the air as a gust of wind 
+                picks up speed. The howling gets louder and more 
+                intense. There's no left, right, backward or forward. 
+                There's nothing but endless, unchanging whiteness.";
           6:
             PlayerTo(backpacklocation);
           7:
@@ -850,7 +849,7 @@ Object  forest "Forest"
     if (snowshoes in player && snowshoes has worn) {
         print 
             "The snowshoes are doing their job by making sure 
-            you don't sink into the snow.";
+            you don't sink into the snow. ";
     }
     if (location == eastofcabin) {
         print "^";
@@ -882,7 +881,7 @@ Object  westofcabin "West Of Cabin"
     print 
         "You're trapped in a snowstorm while visiting the forest 
         during your vacation to a small rural town. This is the worst 
-        snowstorm in more than 40 years. If only you has listened to 
+        snowstorm in more than 40 years. If only you had listened to 
         the news. Well, it's too late for that. The snow has been 
         falling for the past seven hours and shows no signs of 
         stopping anytime soon. You need to get back to your hotel in